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	<title>Comments on: An Example of How My/Our Book &#8220;Being Christian&#8221; Was Edited</title>
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	<description>Trying God&#039;s patience since 1958</description>
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		<title>By: Will Entrekin</title>
		<link>http://johnshore.com/2008/09/05/an-example-of-how-myour-book-being-christian-was-edited/comment-page-1/#comment-8704</link>
		<dc:creator>Will Entrekin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Sep 2008 09:54:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>And they didn&#039;t send you galleys?  I&#039;m surprised.  Bethany House appears to be a rather major Christian publisher. 
 
When I worked at a publisher, as an editor, any such drastic change as you noted required author&#039;s permission. 
 
Did your co-author approve the proofs, or something? </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And they didn&#039;t send you galleys?  I&#039;m surprised.  Bethany House appears to be a rather major Christian publisher.</p>
<p>When I worked at a publisher, as an editor, any such drastic change as you noted required author&#039;s permission.</p>
<p>Did your co-author approve the proofs, or something?</p>
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		<title>By: FreetoBe</title>
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		<dc:creator>FreetoBe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Sep 2008 07:18:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That is a BIG change they made--took the personality right out of the writing. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That is a BIG change they made&#8211;took the personality right out of the writing.</p>
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		<title>By: Longing for Holiday</title>
		<link>http://johnshore.com/2008/09/05/an-example-of-how-myour-book-being-christian-was-edited/comment-page-1/#comment-8688</link>
		<dc:creator>Longing for Holiday</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Sep 2008 02:58:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That is interesting.

Make sure that your editors get all the typos out. Or someone like me with time to spare (NOT) will find them!! LOL</description>
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<p>Make sure that your editors get all the typos out. Or someone like me with time to spare (NOT) will find them!! LOL</p>
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		<title>By: John Shore</title>
		<link>http://johnshore.com/2008/09/05/an-example-of-how-myour-book-being-christian-was-edited/comment-page-1/#comment-8686</link>
		<dc:creator>John Shore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Sep 2008 18:02:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey, William. Yes, actually, in the book itself I do, in fact, quote James 2:26. (The bit I excerpted above was part of our answer to the question, &quot;What does &#039;saved by grace&#039; mean?&quot; Perhaps I&#039;ll run the whole answer. But, yes, within it I do, in fact, present James, as you&#039;ve understood it&#039;d be wise to do.) </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, William. Yes, actually, in the book itself I do, in fact, quote James 2:26. (The bit I excerpted above was part of our answer to the question, &quot;What does &#039;saved by grace&#039; mean?&quot; Perhaps I&#039;ll run the whole answer. But, yes, within it I do, in fact, present James, as you&#039;ve understood it&#039;d be wise to do.)</p>
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		<title>By: William</title>
		<link>http://johnshore.com/2008/09/05/an-example-of-how-myour-book-being-christian-was-edited/comment-page-1/#comment-8685</link>
		<dc:creator>William</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Sep 2008 17:48:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>John, regarding your book passage &#8220;That we are saved not by works but by grace alone&#8212;the grace that comes through an unshakable faith in Jesus Christ..&quot;  Don&#039;t forget James 2:20 and 26. Thanks for all your hard work. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John, regarding your book passage &ldquo;That we are saved not by works but by grace alone&mdash;the grace that comes through an unshakable faith in Jesus Christ..&quot;  Don&#039;t forget James 2:20 and 26. Thanks for all your hard work.</p>
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		<title>By: John Shore</title>
		<link>http://johnshore.com/2008/09/05/an-example-of-how-myour-book-being-christian-was-edited/comment-page-1/#comment-8684</link>
		<dc:creator>John Shore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Sep 2008 17:47:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Will: The books I&#039;m writing with Arterburn are with Bethany House. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Will: The books I&#039;m writing with Arterburn are with Bethany House.</p>
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		<title>By: crystal17a</title>
		<link>http://johnshore.com/2008/09/05/an-example-of-how-myour-book-being-christian-was-edited/comment-page-1/#comment-8680</link>
		<dc:creator>crystal17a</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Sep 2008 14:22:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank You for the warning.  I am new to your sight, but want to look it over more. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank You for the warning.  I am new to your sight, but want to look it over more.</p>
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		<title>By: Will Entrekin</title>
		<link>http://johnshore.com/2008/09/05/an-example-of-how-myour-book-being-christian-was-edited/comment-page-1/#comment-8679</link>
		<dc:creator>Will Entrekin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Sep 2008 13:08:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Didn&#039;t you get proofs to read over?  Galleys and such?  I&#039;ve never heard of a publisher making such drastic changes without both the knowledge and the permission of the author. 
 
With whom did you publish? </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Didn&#039;t you get proofs to read over?  Galleys and such?  I&#039;ve never heard of a publisher making such drastic changes without both the knowledge and the permission of the author.</p>
<p>With whom did you publish?</p>
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		<title>By: John Shore</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Shore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Sep 2008 12:56:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The purpose of editing is to make the final text better, period. Sometimes that means less words, sometimes more. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The purpose of editing is to make the final text better, period. Sometimes that means less words, sometimes more.</p>
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		<title>By: Tim</title>
		<link>http://johnshore.com/2008/09/05/an-example-of-how-myour-book-being-christian-was-edited/comment-page-1/#comment-8676</link>
		<dc:creator>Tim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Sep 2008 11:48:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I thought the process of editing was to reduce the wordiness. Not add to it. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I thought the process of editing was to reduce the wordiness. Not add to it.</p>
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